I love the way you've lit this, very intriguing. The feathers(i think thats what they are!?) on the stool make me feel as if some big beautiful mystical creature was once there but left and thats all thats left of it, which gives a sense of the theme for me. STEF
I really like the positioning of the stool, it seems though that there is a large negative space at the top and that the feathers may be out of focus. I agree with Stef that the lighting is really interesting. But if you have time to retake the photo, you should try to get the fathers more in focus.
Great concept! I feel as though it might be a bit too warm. I also find the background a bit distracting (the seamless has indents) which is easy to fix in photoshop. Another angle to explore is to maybe go down at eye level with the stool and as the other mentioned focus more on the feathers.
I definitely like this photo more than the last one you posted for fantasy, because I feel it relates closer to the theme. I was going to say exactly what Stef said; it makes the viewer think about what kind of creature was there but is now gone.
I do like the way youve got so much negative space, however maybe if you have time, you could play around with different angles? I like what Katya suggested, and maybe you could also try some angles where youre standing and looking down at the stool? (But it would be cool if there was still the negative space and tension that you have now) Maybe just something to play around with :)
I also think having the feathers a bit more in focus, maybe even more focused ON,(like, exaggerated) would be good! :) It would be cool to see this image in B&W as well :)
I love the way you've lit this, very intriguing. The feathers(i think thats what they are!?) on the stool make me feel as if some big beautiful mystical creature was once there but left and thats all thats left of it, which gives a sense of the theme for me.
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I really like the positioning of the stool, it seems though that there is a large negative space at the top and that the feathers may be out of focus. I agree with Stef that the lighting is really interesting. But if you have time to retake the photo, you should try to get the fathers more in focus.
ReplyDeleteOverall its a really interesting photo!
-Jes
Great concept! I feel as though it might be a bit too warm. I also find the background a bit distracting (the seamless has indents) which is easy to fix in photoshop. Another angle to explore is to maybe go down at eye level with the stool and as the other mentioned focus more on the feathers.
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Hey Michelle!
ReplyDeleteI definitely like this photo more than the last one you posted for fantasy, because I feel it relates closer to the theme. I was going to say exactly what Stef said; it makes the viewer think about what kind of creature was there but is now gone.
I do like the way youve got so much negative space, however maybe if you have time, you could play around with different angles? I like what Katya suggested, and maybe you could also try some angles where youre standing and looking down at the stool? (But it would be cool if there was still the negative space and tension that you have now) Maybe just something to play around with :)
I also think having the feathers a bit more in focus, maybe even more focused ON,(like, exaggerated) would be good! :) It would be cool to see this image in B&W as well :)
But overall, great work!
~Lauren~