So I was not really sure which one to choose. But basically it is around the idea of how girls are shy to show that they are on their periods. Gina is holding a pad and passing it to Jes.
Though I think what might make the photo stronger is if you include their faces... I do like the sense of mystery you have going on here, and perhaps you were going for the fact that girls are embarrassed and don't want others to know what's going on when this happens. But I think if you include the girls' faces and they have that expression of fear and embarrassment, it would add a lot to what you're trying to say.
Also, perhaps if you make the pad more obvious, it may make your point a bit stronger, as right now I feel that without your explanation I wouldn't quite know what they're passing. Over all though, good work!
I agree with Lauren, I wasn't sure what was being passed until I read the description! Funny/clever way to portray the theme of shame though i like it a lot, I agree with everything Lauren said! STEF
also, I feel like it should be taken in a more realistic place where it would happen rather than in the studio! I just feel like it would give your image more contextT STEF
I think this is a clever idea!
ReplyDeleteThough I think what might make the photo stronger is if you include their faces... I do like the sense of mystery you have going on here, and perhaps you were going for the fact that girls are embarrassed and don't want others to know what's going on when this happens. But I think if you include the girls' faces and they have that expression of fear and embarrassment, it would add a lot to what you're trying to say.
Also, perhaps if you make the pad more obvious, it may make your point a bit stronger, as right now I feel that without your explanation I wouldn't quite know what they're passing.
Over all though, good work!
~Lauren~
ReplyDeleteI agree with Lauren, I wasn't sure what was being passed until I read the description! Funny/clever way to portray the theme of shame though i like it a lot, I agree with everything Lauren said!
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also, I feel like it should be taken in a more realistic place where it would happen rather than in the studio! I just feel like it would give your image more contextT
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