I immediately wanted to frame this so all you could see was the little scene. I then realized half humor and half of the story is that this is happening on a kitchen counter. It gives it context. hope you enjoy
but funny concept, but i think it would be better if all the eggs were in focus as well and if the angle of the camera was up higher and from slightly above.
Its a cute scenario, but I agree with lyndsey that all the eggs should be in focus since they take up so much of the frame. Also maybe try cropping the left side a bit more too, I feel that the empty space in the top left hand corner is distracting me. And the shadows coming from whatever objects at the top of the frame should maybe be cropped out as well.
haha this made me laugh! i agree with the above comments but i see where you were going with it to have the far egg in focus as he's the one who killed all the other eggs, which draws your eye right to the centre focus of the image. but i think the blurry eggs just takes up too much of the space! STEF
Ahaha, this is cute! Even if it is an egg war scene! Oh! And the killer is an apple!
I agree with the focus too. I understand why the focus is what it is now but like others said, the other eggs take up too much of the frame and I think everything in focus would be more effective. :)
haha i think this is cute, i actually really like it, the out of focus eggs do distract me a bit, but i think it works for the image in what you are trying to capture! good work, i like it!
Im not sure what theme this is!
ReplyDeletebut funny concept, but i think it would be better if all the eggs were in focus as well and if the angle of the camera was up higher and from slightly above.
- Lyndsey
Its a cute scenario, but I agree with lyndsey that all the eggs should be in focus since they take up so much of the frame. Also maybe try cropping the left side a bit more too, I feel that the empty space in the top left hand corner is distracting me. And the shadows coming from whatever objects at the top of the frame should maybe be cropped out as well.
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haha this made me laugh! i agree with the above comments but i see where you were going with it to have the far egg in focus as he's the one who killed all the other eggs, which draws your eye right to the centre focus of the image. but i think the blurry eggs just takes up too much of the space!
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Ahaha, this is cute! Even if it is an egg war scene! Oh! And the killer is an apple!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the focus too. I understand why the focus is what it is now but like others said, the other eggs take up too much of the frame and I think everything in focus would be more effective. :)
-Gina
I actually disagree with putting the eggs in focus.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that the apple is in focus because I think it adds more context to the photograph.
Michelle
haha i think this is cute, i actually really like it, the out of focus eggs do distract me a bit, but i think it works for the image in what you are trying to capture! good work, i like it!
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