Personally, I feel like the second, uncropped version, is the strongest because it does have negative space helping to frame the subject. I would suggest however removing the wall corner in the background as it does attract my eye, being a non organic line. Great work, and yay for managing with desk lamps and not a kino flo ;)
Haha yeah thats partially why I put the cropped version in there because I feel like it would be very tedious work getting rid of that line Thanks for your comments though girl ;)
Personally, I feel like the second, uncropped version, is the strongest because it does have negative space helping to frame the subject. I would suggest however removing the wall corner in the background as it does attract my eye, being a non organic line.
ReplyDeleteGreat work, and yay for managing with desk lamps and not a kino flo ;)
Becky Turner
Haha yeah thats partially why I put the cropped version in there because I feel like it would be very tedious work getting rid of that line
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments though girl ;)
I like the second one too. Definitely more interesting to my eyes.
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Stef
ReplyDeleteI don't think any of these are working....I would attempt a re-shoot with a less overdone approach.
-Robyn