I really like your idea of movement, and the colours you used for the paint are quite pretty as well.
I understand that you're going with a softer look but I would find that if they faces were sharper it'd add a lot more interest to the image (not entirely sure how that would look with the movement blur of the arms though).
Even other than that, I would really enjoy if the girl in your first image had her arm in a position other than directly sitting on her side. I like how her right arm is kind of blurred out as if she doesn't even have one at all, and it would be cool to see if it were possible for the left.
i like the first and third! that doesn't do much to help narrow it down for you, but i think those two are the most striking. really like the dreamy quality you created, these kind of remind me of those fantasy book covers aha. good colours also.
i think my favourite is the first one. i like the eye contact as it creates a personal dynamic and the effect around her looks like wings. really fantastical. nice job!
I love the first one, its the one where the girl is most in focus, and the way the movement is with her arms looks like wings! PERFECT! The exposure is really well done!
THE FIRST ONE IS BEAUTIFUL Love the sense of movement, giving your subject wings- really fits well with the sense of fantasy. Although your subject is directly in the centre of the frame I feel the crop works really well for the image STEF
Third one, but as Jes said, I want at least her eye / that area of her face to be sharp to have a totally defined focal point. Colours and contrast are awesome.
The first one is a really powerful concept and could end up making a really amazing photo but requires a lot of work to bring it all together.
I love the third one. She reminds me of a fairy! But I agree with Jes and Tyler. I would love to see that image with a clearer face. But really amazing job!!
I really like your idea of movement, and the colours you used for the paint are quite pretty as well.
ReplyDeleteI understand that you're going with a softer look but I would find that if they faces were sharper it'd add a lot more interest to the image (not entirely sure how that would look with the movement blur of the arms though).
Even other than that, I would really enjoy if the girl in your first image had her arm in a position other than directly sitting on her side. I like how her right arm is kind of blurred out as if she doesn't even have one at all, and it would be cool to see if it were possible for the left.
Really cool idea Helen!
i like the first and third! that doesn't do much to help narrow it down for you, but i think those two are the most striking. really like the dreamy quality you created,
ReplyDeletethese kind of remind me of those fantasy book covers aha. good colours also.
i think my favourite is the first one. i like the eye contact as it creates a personal dynamic and the effect around her looks like wings. really fantastical. nice job!
- carrie cai.
I love this!!
ReplyDeleteI love the first one, its the one where the girl is most in focus, and the way the movement is with her arms looks like wings! PERFECT!
The exposure is really well done!
over all just great quality and great concept!
- Lyndsey Constable
THE FIRST ONE IS BEAUTIFUL
ReplyDeleteLove the sense of movement, giving your subject wings- really fits well with the sense of fantasy. Although your subject is directly in the centre of the frame I feel the crop works really well for the image
STEF
Third one, but as Jes said, I want at least her eye / that area of her face to be sharp to have a totally defined focal point. Colours and contrast are awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe first one is a really powerful concept and could end up making a really amazing photo but requires a lot of work to bring it all together.
I love the third one. She reminds me of a fairy! But I agree with Jes and Tyler. I would love to see that image with a clearer face. But really amazing job!!
ReplyDelete-Gina