a nice take on the theme, i really enjoy it. the yellow flower is a nice burst of color and life out of the neutral egg shell. i'm a little confused as to how the edges finish on the right. is it just the egg shell blending into the black or? the lines are clear/defined so i'm not really sure. it adds abstractness but it also leaves me confused.
I agree with Carrie on the confusion of the black space to the right....it looks like something fell over the lens. I also think the colour cast and lighting are a problem. Aside from those issues, I don't think the image is working well...it's a bit cheesy and rudimentary.
a nice take on the theme, i really enjoy it. the yellow flower is a nice burst of color and life out of the neutral egg shell. i'm a little confused as to how the edges finish on the right. is it just the egg shell blending into the black or? the lines are clear/defined so i'm not really sure. it adds abstractness but it also leaves me confused.
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Michelle
ReplyDeleteI agree with Carrie on the confusion of the black space to the right....it looks like something fell over the lens. I also think the colour cast and lighting are a problem. Aside from those issues, I don't think the image is working well...it's a bit cheesy and rudimentary.
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